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Wednesday, October 04, 2006

omg, i just read part ONE of delle's essay. I was thrown off by her FIRST sentence. and her points are very ermm, original. and has an "intelligent grasp of subject matter. answer demonstates a freshness of insight", 2nd box: "Well focussed on the question and addresses most of its key issues"
3rd box: "Good analysis and evaluation of content and presentation, and where appropriate, there is evidence of the ability to critically appreciate the text"
4th box: "Active and close engagement with the text. Sensitive and informed personal response."
5th box:" Ideas seveloped effectively and well supported by textual evidence. Answers reflect a highly coherent argument and clarity of thought and expression."

ALL TRUE. argh, i seriously don't deserve my 15. please take it back. and my b4 for ss/lit too. Omg. take back the moderation too.

Her work is like damn neat and 4 pages of TINY handwriting. Ticks all over the place and the only thing the marker corrected was for grammar and it was slight . And there's vocab ~~peppered~~ EVERYWHERE in the essay. On one page alone, there are 7 cheem words. and she wrote on the prose. the damn african one where the names are so complicated you have to check the spelling everytime you want to mention the character. Haha, even she got confused quite a bit and cancelled "him" and put "her" instead at some points in the essay. Because the names are so ambiguous, you don't know if the person's a guy or a girl. Oh yah, her cancellations made are only because of this gender mix-up thing and other than that, there are only 5 cancellations in both part one and two. Furthermore, throughout part one, there isn't a single "This shows that"; "This is evident in" etc etc. Her writing style's like so natural.

OMG I'M SO JEALOUS. HAHA, SO PROUD SHE'S FROM 2/2.

Okay, gonna read her part 2 now.

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